Dear Chris,
When you write a book, you need to have an ending. Stopping the story after 370 pages with the idea that if I want to find out what happens to our cast of characters, buy the next book. Here is some news for you Chris, if you can't come up with a decent ending to the first book, I am not buying the second. Really, how did you get this published?
I find this tale lacking in character development, motive, and engaging action. There is a kernel of an interesting idea here - a comic book series that pulls kids into another world to steal their life force. But you need to develop that idea with a little more detail to get me to buy into a second book.
On the Tex-the-Cat scale - this book gets one paw up. The cover, which is slightly three dimensional is of interest. I also enjoyed the artwork on the cover, but less so the illustrations on the inside.
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Wow Chris is an amazing author. He includes many suspenseful parts in his book.I read the first and second which gave me a new look at fiction books.
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